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Post by Jakey on Jun 29, 2006 4:16:51 GMT -6
I don't write poetry.
I just put part of my brain on the paper (not literally of course, I need it to live).
I get an interesting (usually depressing) thought and write it down in words that I think helps explain to me what the hell is going on in this twisted, warped thing I call my mind.
(I am cursed with not being able to fully realise what the hell my mind is thinking. Or, at least, the thoughts that I do think of I cannot understand fully. I aint kidding you around)
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Post by Nanaki~* on Jun 29, 2006 15:15:57 GMT -6
i know. I'm not exactly sane... half the time i completly forget things and remember them after it's too late we kinda have the same problem when it comes to thinking as well ^^ focusing isn't invented for me yet ^^'
it's still good ^^ nonetheless
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Post by [[.:black lily:.]] on Jul 9, 2006 9:21:07 GMT -6
i know. I'm not exactly sane... half the time i completly forget things and remember them after it's too late we kinda have the same problem when it comes to thinking as well ^^ focusing isn't invented for me yet ^^' it's still good ^^ nonetheless xD Yes...I am having the same thing to. If I focus on one thing, I forget the other important things too..... ><;; But I'm trying to fix that. I'm a little slow... D: Your writings are still very good!! It has a depth to it.....meanings and reason in it... |
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Post by Jakey on Aug 7, 2006 9:23:47 GMT -6
Yay I updated again! And once again I was feeling like crap when I thought of it ^_^
The path of true happiness is one of glorious beauty, wellbeing, and exaltation.
The path of deluded misguidance is one of shrouded fear, paranoia, and shadowed hate.
The path of true happiness is strolled down by men who are truly content with themselves.
The path of deluded misguidance is fumbled upon by fools who lie to themselves to make peace.
But, the wise man, he knows, that the paths are not as dissimilar as one would first imagine.
He, the all-knowing one, can forsee when these paths cross.
He knows this because the paths, they are one and the same.
Not my best work, by any means, but I feel it has a deeper meaning to it.
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Post by [[.:black lily:.]] on Aug 11, 2006 18:21:49 GMT -6
It sounds so knowledgeable..... but I'm confused.... xP I'm trying to figure it out.....still....
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Post by Jakey on Aug 16, 2006 12:35:57 GMT -6
Heh. If you really want to know what I mean Black Lily, just PM me (so I dont spoil it for others XD)
Its nothing special, so dont go expecting a life changing statement XD
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Post by Jakey on Aug 16, 2006 12:42:15 GMT -6
Flutter gently as a cloud
From where does the summer wind
flutter gently as a cloud;
Why, where the mighty rainbow sings
its song so marvellous and proud.
Alone he stands there, in the wind
yet he is filled with happiness;
For summer comes and summer goes
but friendship, yes, it is endless.
ZOMG the first piece of NON-depressed poetry!
Heh. I just spontaneously though and weote this,
Hope you like.
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